I would like to ask you for your help one more time :)
This sentence is a part of my Motivation letter for admission to a Master's programme. Having talked about my education and work, follows this paragraph. My question is if the word "essentially" is a good one to open that sentence?
Thank you again!
Essentially, my education and my work experience thus far have given me valuable insights into the environment in which companies operate - how they affect this environment and are affected by it.
This sentence is a part of my Motivation letter for admission to a Master's programme. Having talked about my education and work, follows this paragraph. My question is if the word "essentially" is a good one to open that sentence?
Thank you again!
Essentially, my education and my work experience thus far have given me valuable insights into the environment in which companies operate - how they affect this environment and are affected by it.