"learning English with adventure games"

"When I was 13, I would shiver from excitement whenever I would solve a puzzle in Indiana Jones and the Last Crusade, often after two days of trying."

Shouldn't it be

"When I was 13, I would shiver from excitement whenever I solved a puzzle in Indiana Jones and the Last Crusade, often after two days of trying"?

Hi, they both really mean the same thing.. Your version is just more succinct and his version is a bit more redundant.