Please give me some advice on my English audio sample

Parappa   Sun Jan 10, 2010 8:53 am GMT
That's right! I'm in the house! Here it comes!


EXTRA! EXTRA! READ ALL ABOUT IT!
THE BEST BURGERS IN TOWN FROM ALL AROUND;
PEOPLE FROM AROUND THE WORLD COME AND GET IT!
THE LINE GOES AROUND LIKE A MERRY-GO-ROUND!

CUT!
cut!
YOU GOT TO, YOU GOT TO HEAT!
heat!
VERY NICELY!
AND TOAST!
toast!
YOU GOT TO, YOU GOT TO, YOU GOT TO - COOK!
cook!
YOU'RE DOING GOOD NOW, NOW CUT!
cut!
VERY NICE!
YOU GOT TO HEAT!
heat!
T-T-T-T-TOAST! HAHA! YES!
toast!
VERY NICE! AND NOW COOK!
cook!
YES, RIGHT!

BURGERS TO FRIES, A SHAKE OR A FRIEND;
IF YOU'RE HUNGRY, SIMPLY LINE UP AT THE END!
COME ON PEOPLE, GATHER 'ROUND;
WE GOT EVERYTHING YOU WANT FROM ALL AROUND!

CUT THE LETTUCE!
cut the lettuce!
YOU GOT TO HEAT THE GRILL!
heat the grill!
YEAH, AND TOAST THE BUNS! MY BUNS ARE VERY TOASTY.
toast the buns!
UH HUH, AND COOK THE PATTIES!
cook the patties!
SER-SER-SER-SERVE THE DRINKS! SERVE THEM! COME ON HURRY UP!
serve the drinks!
AND MELT THE CHEESE! OW!
melt the cheese!
FRENCH THE FRIES! FRENCH THEM!
french the fries!
SWEEP THE FLOOR!
sweep the floor!

THE KETCHUP, THE MUSTARD, THE SALT, AND THE PEPPER;
POUR IT ALL RIGHT GUYS; WE GOT NO EXTRA.
YO, WATCH THE GRILL, CONTROL THE FLAME GUYS;
FOLLOW THE RULES, STAY PRODUCTIVE AND WISE!

AND COOK THOSE BURGERS!
cook those burgers!
MMMMM, TURN THE PATTY OVER!
turn the patty over!
COME ON WATCH THEM FRIES!
watch them fries!
BETTER EXECUTE SOONER!
better execute sooner!

ooooooOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHH!

BRING ON THE KETCHUP!
bring on the ketchup!
DON'T FORGET THE CHEESE!
don't forget the cheese!
BRING ON THE MUSTARD!
bring on the mustard!
HANDLE IT WITH EASE!
handle it with ease!

BURGERS, BURGERS, IT ALL WE HAVE IN MIND!
WE COOK THE BEST; TASTES BETTER THAN WINE!
NOW PUT IT ON THE TRAY, IS IT FOR HERE OR TO GO?
ANY WHICH WAY, IT TASTES GOOD, YOU KNOW!

COOK THOSE BURGERS; TURN THE PATTY OVER!
cook those burgers; turn the patty over!
CUT THE LETTUCE; DON'T FORGET THE CHEESE!
cut the lettuce; don't forget the cheese
TOAST THE BUNS; FRENCH THE FRIES!
toast the buns; french the fries!
BRING ON THE KETCHUP; SWEEP THE FLOORS!
bring on the ketchup, sweep the floors!

YEAH, YEAH! NOW THAT'S WHAT I'M TALKING ABOUT... GO SERVE THOSE BURGERS RIGHT NOW!

alright! i'm off to a good start!