Help me with mistakes on site about Poland

My name is Tomasz Serewa. I'm polish student of tourism. I make site about Poland http://www.tourisminpoland.com, it is only in english. I know that my english is not so well and I please you to help me with mistakes on site. It should takes only few minutes for native-speaker. If you point any mistake please e-mail me EMAIL REMOVED - Send PM to This User Instead . I will by very thankfull..
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Kindest regards

Hey Tomasz,

I was not able to make the link. Your idea sounds fine for me. I will try to get back to you next week.

Take care
Roger

"Make the link"? Do you mean you couldn't visit the site? The problem is that the link has a comma after .com. Juast delete it in the address line.

By the way, the site needs a complete rewrite...

Your first page is:
"Thank You for visiting: TourismInPoland.com!
We will present You essential and other information about Poland. After reading this texts You get good knowledge about tourism in Poland and preparation to travel to this beautiful country. We want help You to find contacts with Polish active tourism and extreme sports organizers. Our informations are current and checked. This site is made in Poland by polish student of Tourism.
If you find any bugs and if you want be sponsor of this site contact us admin@tourisminpoland.com
If You are looking for other site about tourism in Poland visit:http://www.poland-tourism.pl"

A better version

Welcome to TourismInPoland.com!

Our aim is to present you with essential information about Poland. After reading thes,e pages you will get a good overview of all the things Poland has to offer and you will be well prepared for a trip to our beautiful country. We want to help you get in touch with organizers of active tourism and extreme sports in Poland. Our information is current and researched. This site is made in Poland by a Polish student of tourism.

If you find any errors or if you want to advertize on this site ,contact us at admin@tourisminpoland.com

If you are looking for another site about tourism in Poland, see: visit:http://www.poland-tourism.pl

<If you are looking for another site about tourism in Poland, see:>

NO NO NO! You don't want the visiter to you site encourged to leave the site rephase it as:

'For futher information or other related sites please visit www.poland-tourism.pl '

<If you find any errors or if you want to advertize on this site ,contact us at >

*mmm here my version.

Problems concerning this website please contact the admin.

Advertising spaces are available by contacting the admin for futher information.

Here's my version. :)

Welcome to TourismInPoland.com!

Our aim is to present you with everything you need to know about Poland. These pages will give you an overview of all the things Poland has to offer, and you will be well prepared for a trip to our beautiful country. We want to help you get in touch with organizers of active tourism and extreme sports in Poland. Our information is well researched and up to date. This site is run in Poland by a Polish student of tourism.

If you encounter any problems with the site or would like to purchase advertising, please contact us at admin@tourisminpoland.com

For further information on Polish tourism, you can visit http://www.poland-tourism.pl