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Dear recruit consultant:
From your advertisement I heard that the position of “ ” is currently recruiting, and depend on my career experience and my professional study in business, I would like to apply for admission to this position. As an experienced person in B2B marketing and a bilingual MBA, I feel confident that I will be the right candidate for this job.
While I was in the former company, accomplishments have included the following:
1: Developed new businesses for the company in both developing new clients and developing new services to exist clients, the service sales almost 50% higher in like-to-like comparison in B2B sales.
2: Developed a new marketing form bond with mobile services for the company, the new form boosted B2C sales in a significant way.
3: Defined the market of the company as a middle layer of the online entertainment market. First sell company’s service to producers as a B2B transaction, and take the product then sell to members is a B2C transaction, the definition helped building the company’s strategy as a important mile-stone.
Also my personal attribute is fully represented below, I believe they are what you have been looking for to match this position:
1: Great ambition to achieve business success, I believe that it’s the most important quality for this position.
2: Sharp, inquisitive and intuitive characteristics, and high level of self-management.
3: Ability to join a new culture and create relationships with people who have different cultures and backgrounds.
4: Effective Communication.
5:Keen to learn and self-study ability: I believe that learning is a never-ending process.
6: Combined Business Knowledge from the MBA study.
I am looking forward to further discussing my qualifications, which are fully presented in my enclosed resume, and demonstrating how I will perfectly fit for this position. Thank you very much for your consideration.
Dear recruit consultant:
From your advertisement I heard that the position of “ ” is currently recruiting, and depend on my career experience and my professional study in business, I would like to apply for admission to this position. As an experienced person in B2B marketing and a bilingual MBA, I feel confident that I will be the right candidate for this job.
While I was in the former company, accomplishments have included the following:
1: Developed new businesses for the company in both developing new clients and developing new services to exist clients, the service sales almost 50% higher in like-to-like comparison in B2B sales.
2: Developed a new marketing form bond with mobile services for the company, the new form boosted B2C sales in a significant way.
3: Defined the market of the company as a middle layer of the online entertainment market. First sell company’s service to producers as a B2B transaction, and take the product then sell to members is a B2C transaction, the definition helped building the company’s strategy as a important mile-stone.
Also my personal attribute is fully represented below, I believe they are what you have been looking for to match this position:
1: Great ambition to achieve business success, I believe that it’s the most important quality for this position.
2: Sharp, inquisitive and intuitive characteristics, and high level of self-management.
3: Ability to join a new culture and create relationships with people who have different cultures and backgrounds.
4: Effective Communication.
5:Keen to learn and self-study ability: I believe that learning is a never-ending process.
6: Combined Business Knowledge from the MBA study.
I am looking forward to further discussing my qualifications, which are fully presented in my enclosed resume, and demonstrating how I will perfectly fit for this position. Thank you very much for your consideration.