help me:)

hallo   Wed Jul 06, 2005 1:08 pm GMT
hi i am 14 years old and i want to learn english. wel, first of all i can tell you all about me and than you can said if something i have wrote is wrong. i am from afghansitan but i have lived my whole life in norway
we have summer holydays rigth now. i like this side, its really interesting.
and its helping me really to learn english. its truth that english is easy if you really want to learn, but i think i need help. i have readed you all topics and i saw that you are good to write
The Swede   Wed Jul 06, 2005 1:12 pm GMT
Well, I could understood you.
Sander   Wed Jul 06, 2005 1:38 pm GMT
Well,I could understand you.
The Swede   Wed Jul 06, 2005 2:17 pm GMT
Well, I understood you!!and I could understand you! :)
Sander   Wed Jul 06, 2005 2:40 pm GMT
I could understand you too.
Sander   Wed Jul 06, 2005 2:42 pm GMT
Even though you tend to speak as if he was dead ;)
The Swede   Wed Jul 06, 2005 3:06 pm GMT
I wrote so becouse there were some misstakes, but they were not so huge and not so many.
beverly   Wed Jul 06, 2005 9:35 pm GMT
Hi, Hallo,

I understood you, too. If your were speaking to me, you would be communicating in a good way for someone who hasn't been learning a long time.

But you asked for corrections on your writing. Here are some that I noticed:

You should have said:

and then you can SAY if something I have WRITTEN is wrong

we have summer HOLIDAYS (if you mean there is no school in summer)
we have summer HOLY DAYS (if you mean religious)

I like this SITE

it's THE TRUTH that English is easy (or)
it's TRUE that English is easy

I have READ YOUR topics (or)
I have READ ALL YOUR topics

Hallo, I don't understand your last sentence. Perhaps you wanted to say,
"I have read all your topics, and I felt (or thought)
1. that you were good writers"
(or maybe)
2. that it would be good to write to you "

Hallo, I will allow someone else to talk about your capitalization, spelling and punctuation. Okay?
Mxsmanic   Thu Jul 07, 2005 9:21 am GMT
The first-person singular personal pronoun I is always capitalized in English, even in the middle of a sentence.
Deborah   Thu Jul 07, 2005 9:33 am GMT
Hallo, I agree with Beverly. But here's one more correction:

"its really interesting" --> "it's really interesting"
MS GENIUS   Wed Jul 13, 2005 8:32 am GMT
U R SO GOOD IN ENGLISH DEAR!!!!!! DONT HAVE TO LEARN ANYTHIN!!!