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is this correct?
Is this sentence correct? I am feeling out an online profile, and it is very important that I will make an appearance of an educated girl.
"Once I fluttered my eye lushes so ecstatically that I took off the ground and hit my head on the ceiling."
You should probably put a comma after "once" and change "lushes" to "lashes".
<<Is this sentence correct? I am feeling out an online profile, and it is very important that I will make an appearance of an educated girl.
"Once I fluttered my eye lushes so ecstatically that I took off the ground and hit my head on the ceiling." >> Correction: Is this sentence correct? I am filling out an online profile, and it is very important that I appear to be educated. "Once, I fluttered my eyelashes so ecstatically that I took off, as into outer space, and hit my head on the ceiling." --or-- "Once, I fluttered my eyelashes so ecstatically that I left the ground and hit my head on the ceiling." <<and it is very important that I will make an appearance of an educated girl.>> btw, that'll definitely do it ; ) |