I make mistakes...YOU correct them!! 3 recordings!

antimooner   Wed Oct 26, 2005 8:24 am GMT
Hey antimooners,

http://www.geocities.com/gee_lay/1.wav
http://www.geocities.com/gee_lay/11.wav
http://www.geocities.com/gee_lay/6.wav

Script:
Please call Stella. Ask her to bring these things with her from the store: Six spoons of fresh snow peas, five thick slabs of blue cheese, and maybe a snack for her brother Bob. We also need a small plastic snake and a big toy frog for the kids. She can scoop these things into three red bags, and we will go meet her Wednesday at the train station.


Please feel free to tell me about anything I did wrong. Your notes DO count. At least to me!!

Enjoy them... or enjoy laughing at them... loool.

Thank you.
Thank you.
Thank you.
youness   Sun Oct 30, 2005 3:01 am GMT
thank you too
Alone   Thu Apr 13, 2006 12:17 pm GMT
Your voise like my grandma
gex   Tue Apr 18, 2006 8:22 pm GMT
First recording:
- you didn't say "to" in "ask her to".
- I also didn't hear "plastic" ("plastic snake")
- instead of "and we will" you said "OR we will"

When I click the other two links I get a "Sorry, this GeoCities site is currently unavailable." error, sorry.

You need to work on this. Try to speak things LOUD and CLEARLY instead of silently and sounding depressive. This doesn't help really.
Overly this sounds like you're talking about someone who's actually DIED or something.