Can you correct my sentence, please!

Fiona   Mon Apr 28, 2008 10:23 am GMT
Hello! :)

Can you please correct my sentence! Which way to say it is the right one?

Thank you all! :)

These experiences instilled in me the desire to own and manage my own business someday and from then on I have or was determined to place my education and my future career at the center of my life.
Guest   Mon Apr 28, 2008 10:51 am GMT
<<These experiences instilled in me the desire to own and manage my own business someday and from then on I have or was determined to place my education and my future career at the center of my life.>>

These experiences instilled in me the desire to own and manage my own business someday, and from then on I was determined to place my education and my future career at the center of my life.

These experiences instilled in me the desire to someday own my own business. From then on, I was determined to place my education and career at the center of my life.
Fiona   Mon Apr 28, 2008 10:52 am GMT
Thank you! :)