A bad sentence in need of correction

Yes it would! But it's getting harder and harder to manage, isn't it? ;)

Tetsuo,

<< Geoff_One,

Excellant! Why couldn't I think of a sentence like yours? But shouldn't "hangs" be "hanged"?

My Japanese (nippongo) version:

Shinshitsu no kabe ni kaketeatta Joe-san ga kaita e wa yuube no kaji de higaiwo koumurimashita.

Geoff_one, are you a native speaker?

Do you speak and/or write Japanese? >>

Watashi no nihongo wa tabun ma ma desu.
Watashi no nihongo hanasu koto mo oomu no yo na kangi ga shite
to omiomasu.
Nihonjin to issho ni Nihongo o shaberu toki ni wa kiki toru
koto ga amari dekimasen.

Geoff_One,

In a self-serving manner I made you my English mentor, so from now on I'll ask you directly when I have a question about English grammar. I hope you don't mind my impudence.