Is it right?

Spinner   Thu Dec 15, 2005 12:32 pm GMT
"What would have happened, had Bob walked farther as far as the river bank?" Is it grammatically right?
Ben   Thu Dec 15, 2005 12:36 pm GMT
No. Here are some options to choose from, depending on what you mean:

"What would have happened, had Bob walked as far as the river bank?"
"What would have happened, had Bob walked off the river bank?"
"What would have happened, had Bob walked further than to the edge of the river?"

Hope that helps :)

Ben.