Good English Writting?

Dean   Fri Apr 06, 2007 4:46 am GMT
Can you pls check if this is a good english writting?

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ABC is a fast-growing firm and awarded for Structured Products
House of the year recently. From you website I note ABC combines
the drive of a traditional investment bank with a genuine empathy
for their employees. I particular liked your culture. I would like
to work in a company "emphasises teamwork and a collaborative
approach". Additionally, ABC is an innovative and forward
thinking company, where I feel I would excel in a team environment,
and benefit immensely from the opportunities and high quality
graduate training provided."
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Guest   Tue Apr 10, 2007 11:43 am GMT
Hi, I think this is a good piece of English writting.

Well done!
Vytenis   Tue Apr 10, 2007 11:48 am GMT
Yeah, apart from "writting" :))))) LOL
Patrick   Tue Apr 10, 2007 3:43 pm GMT
Wow, you must've worked hard on that paragraph, considering your opening statement explaining the paragraph is riddled with errors.

"Can you pls check if this is a good english writting?"

pls = please
a = there should not be an "a" there
english = should be capitalized
writting = writing
Guest   Tue Apr 10, 2007 4:59 pm GMT
From you website > From your website
I particular liked > I particularly liked
work in a company "emphasises > work in a company which "emphasises