Hi everyone!
Let's take a look at this introdution. I'm in a web creater contest ( a contest which is hold every year in my school). My topic is Foreign Culture. It's so cool!, isn't it? But my English is still very bad and I afraid that I can't get the prize. So up till now I haven't finished my web yet. Please help me correct many english mistakes in my web's introduction below. Thanks alot! (if I success you'll find my web at www.IC93n.com for a month. I think it'll be very useful for you 'caused all are free!)
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INTERNATIONAL CULTURES
This web includes:
1.Bad Faces:
_ Sometimes we study much from bad things so let's learn and know more about many countries culture and their bad faces. Notice: It's not shame when you see them, it's just shame when you do like them!
2.Humor:
_ If each people have sense of humor, the world will be always friendly and there's no row and war.Let's learn how to get humor
3.Language:
_ One of ways to study language effectively. You can get real image, real speaking, pronouciation, body language, culture...I think you'll be interested in them a lot
4.International Musics:
_ One part of life, it relaxes, open our mind, improve our soul. I think they'll be the best musics you've ever listened.
5.National Anthems:
_ The collection of national anthems. Very cool!
6.Video Clip
_ Some very good films (such as: King of rings, Ninja, Pao's story..etc) you didnt have chance to watch or some very very awsome documentary films (such as: Ho Chi Minh ways, Dien Bien Phu-"an inviolable fortress", Pearl Habor , Hiroshima and Nagasaki-Abomb, Terorism 11.9... etc) that help widen your knowledge about geography and history are all stored here. Enjoy them!
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Let's take a look at this introdution. I'm in a web creater contest ( a contest which is hold every year in my school). My topic is Foreign Culture. It's so cool!, isn't it? But my English is still very bad and I afraid that I can't get the prize. So up till now I haven't finished my web yet. Please help me correct many english mistakes in my web's introduction below. Thanks alot! (if I success you'll find my web at www.IC93n.com for a month. I think it'll be very useful for you 'caused all are free!)
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INTERNATIONAL CULTURES
This web includes:
1.Bad Faces:
_ Sometimes we study much from bad things so let's learn and know more about many countries culture and their bad faces. Notice: It's not shame when you see them, it's just shame when you do like them!
2.Humor:
_ If each people have sense of humor, the world will be always friendly and there's no row and war.Let's learn how to get humor
3.Language:
_ One of ways to study language effectively. You can get real image, real speaking, pronouciation, body language, culture...I think you'll be interested in them a lot
4.International Musics:
_ One part of life, it relaxes, open our mind, improve our soul. I think they'll be the best musics you've ever listened.
5.National Anthems:
_ The collection of national anthems. Very cool!
6.Video Clip
_ Some very good films (such as: King of rings, Ninja, Pao's story..etc) you didnt have chance to watch or some very very awsome documentary films (such as: Ho Chi Minh ways, Dien Bien Phu-"an inviolable fortress", Pearl Habor , Hiroshima and Nagasaki-Abomb, Terorism 11.9... etc) that help widen your knowledge about geography and history are all stored here. Enjoy them!
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