Does this sentence make sense??

I'm writing a play that is going to be performed in English.
If you are a native English speaker, please check these two sentences whether they make sense.
If the sentences seem awkward, please correc them so that they make more sense.


#1. "Seduce me as you did before."

#2. "Your kiss will taste sweeter if you stop smoking."

I want those sentences to be more poetic and eloquent.
Help me please!!!

I'm ready for you to seduce me once again.

Your lips will taste much sweeter without smoke getting into mine.

I like the originals... Except maybe "kisses"

I think they are fine.

The first one sounds fine to me, but "if you stop smoking" somehow doesn't sound very poetic to me. I like Guest's suggestion for that one.

#1 "Seduce me again, same as last time." (or "... just like last time")

# 1 Hit me baby one more time (implies the person has kissed you before)

#2 I wanna taste your lips, not tobacco

<< Hit me baby one more time >>

That was bad enough when Britney Spears was singing it. ;)