Which one do you think better?

Jijia   Fri Oct 21, 2005 6:57 am GMT
Sino-foreign contractual ( investment ) joint venture
Sion-foreign investment joint venture
Sino-foreign investment enterprise

Which one do you think better? Or could you please offer me something better than one of these three?

I am looking forward to your favourable reply.

Jijia Zhang
Salesmanager

Best Regards and thanks
Jijia   Tue Nov 01, 2005 3:04 am GMT
Thank you!
Uriel   Tue Nov 01, 2005 3:18 am GMT
I like the third one. I think the others are a little too long and wordy to make "good copy".
Jijia   Fri Dec 16, 2005 2:07 pm GMT
And what do you mean by "good copy" ?
Thanks!
Guest   Mon Dec 19, 2005 2:28 am GMT
A version that you should use.
Guest   Mon Dec 19, 2005 8:56 pm GMT
Jijia, "make good copy" is an informal expression, which means "to be an interesting piece of writing".