Is it a correct way to say it

bubu   Sun Jan 29, 2006 5:31 pm GMT
Hello,

The following is a mesage that is going to be heard in every room of a hotel or institution. Can you plz modify it??

" Good morning!! This is ATC, ayurvedic therapy centre. We provide Aurvedic Message and steam bath. Beside, there are other therapies available too. Please step in to experience how relaxing and refreshing it is. We are open from .......to.....................Thank you!!!
Ben   Sun Jan 29, 2006 6:22 pm GMT
I assume that was meant to be 'massage' not message ;)

I would put bath into the plural 'baths.

If it's going to be like an advert, for the third and fourth sentences I'd recommend: " We provide Aurvedic massage, steam baths, and much more."

This keeps it short, and to the point. If you really want to include the fourth sentence, I'd use 'also' or 'furthermore' instead of 'beside'. But I think it's too long and fumbly and non-natural with that sentence in.

Ben.
bubu   Mon Jan 30, 2006 5:27 am GMT
Thank you ben.