Discovery of Real Beauty

YoYo   Mon Aug 28, 2006 3:37 am GMT
I have written an essay about I have found the real beauty.
Can I use the heading as " Discovery of Real Beauty" ?
May I know your suggestions and correction.
Uriel   Mon Aug 28, 2006 4:12 am GMT
It's perfectly grammatical, if that's what you're asking.

But your first sentence should read, "I have written an essay about finding real beauty." Not "I have found". You're throwing a whole different tense (and a new subject) in the middle of your original sentence if you do that.
YoYo   Mon Aug 28, 2006 7:28 am GMT
Thank you very much, Uriel.
I use several names in this forum.
But the most questions I asked is answered by you.
It is very kind of you to answer my stupid questions.
Thank you again.
Uriel   Mon Aug 28, 2006 8:21 am GMT
My pleasure.
Robin   Wed Aug 30, 2006 5:22 am GMT
"My Discovery of Real Beauty"

I have written an essay about how I have found real beauty.
Uriel   Wed Aug 30, 2006 8:52 am GMT
That still sounds very awkward to me, but to each their own.