help for checking ;)

RZ   Mon Jun 04, 2007 4:11 pm GMT
could anybody check this paragraph for me, many thx. I read it for several times but still not sure if it sounds strange ;)

"working and studying in a professional business environment will take me further with its knowledge and skills, and the position of " Trainee Consultant" will be the best way to learn business knowledge and develop myself, without few years you will find out that I become a great contributor for the company's success."
Guest   Mon Jun 04, 2007 4:20 pm GMT
Changing the original wording as little as possible, I'd say:

"... myself. Within a few years you will find out that I have become a great contributor to the company's success."