essay question

nick   Fri Jul 13, 2007 5:10 pm GMT
E.G: Out neighborhood have a large piece of empty land, two proposals for this, one is to build a shopping center, the other one is build a park, whick will most improve the qulity of life.

I chosed to build a shopping center, and I had three reasons:1.improve the community economy. 2.create jobs for neighborhood 3.convinient for resident.
the question is it's very difficult for me the expand the topic sentence, to have sentence to support it, are there any way to make it a little easier? Thanx!
RalphZ   Fri Jul 13, 2007 6:39 pm GMT
I think your 1 2 3 bullet-points they look very simple already...why you don't just tell your neighbor your 1 2 3 points like what you posted?
nick   Fri Jul 13, 2007 10:41 pm GMT
this is an essay question, I want to expant the topic sentence, but I don't know how.
nick   Fri Jul 13, 2007 11:42 pm GMT
This is not my homework, I don't have to do it.I'd like to know how to write some to support the topic sentence.