Here a passage that contains 10 mistakes. I’ve corrected them between parentheses. Could you please go over them and check if they are correct. If there are other possible answers, would you please point them out?
THANKS in advance:)
This has been one of those days when I wish I would have stayed (had stayed) in bed. It started at 7:30 this morning when Eman called me up and asked for “a little favour.” She’s always asking me to do things for her and never wants to take any responsibility for herself. She acts as if the world owe (owes) her a living. I wish she won’t (wouldn’t) do that. Today she wanted me to take her to the mall because she had to get her mother a birthday present. I told her I had to be downtown at ten A.M for a job interview, and she said it wouldn’t take long to drive to the mall and I’d have plenty of time to get downtown. I gave in and agreed to take her; but something told me I shouldn’t (shouldn’t have). if I would have listened (had listened)to my inner voice, I might had (might have)a job today. When we were on the freeway, there was a major accident, and traffic was tied up for over an hour. By the time we got to the mall, it was ten-thirty, so I missed my job interview. I think I probably would get (would have got/gotten)the job if I would have managed (had managed) to make it to the interview because my qualifications are good. If only I would have listened (hadn’t listened)to Trudy! I just hope she never asked (will never ask) me to do something like this again, and if she does, I hope I didn’t agree (won’t agree).
THANKS in advance:)
This has been one of those days when I wish I would have stayed (had stayed) in bed. It started at 7:30 this morning when Eman called me up and asked for “a little favour.” She’s always asking me to do things for her and never wants to take any responsibility for herself. She acts as if the world owe (owes) her a living. I wish she won’t (wouldn’t) do that. Today she wanted me to take her to the mall because she had to get her mother a birthday present. I told her I had to be downtown at ten A.M for a job interview, and she said it wouldn’t take long to drive to the mall and I’d have plenty of time to get downtown. I gave in and agreed to take her; but something told me I shouldn’t (shouldn’t have). if I would have listened (had listened)to my inner voice, I might had (might have)a job today. When we were on the freeway, there was a major accident, and traffic was tied up for over an hour. By the time we got to the mall, it was ten-thirty, so I missed my job interview. I think I probably would get (would have got/gotten)the job if I would have managed (had managed) to make it to the interview because my qualifications are good. If only I would have listened (hadn’t listened)to Trudy! I just hope she never asked (will never ask) me to do something like this again, and if she does, I hope I didn’t agree (won’t agree).